Part 1 - by Maxine
Scene 1
Shot 1
A medium shot of the protagonist refining pills in the yard
The protagonist puts materials into the furnace and the furnace is shaking and is about to explode.
Shot2
Camera cuts to the furnace
The furnace tries to hold it in and it blows up. Black smoke obscures the camera.
A long shot of the expolsion
Shot 3
The protagonist coughs, squints her eyes and waves her hand.
Shot 4
Protagonist perspective
The smoke dissipated, and a dizzy Phoenix is on the ground.
Scene 2
Shot 1
The camera faces the door - we see the protagonist
The protagonist pushes the door with her shoulders and enters the room with the medicine in her arms
Shot 2
Camera facing the furnace
The furnace stares at the medicine that the protagonist is holding approaches as the protagonist puts it down by the bedside table
Furnace sniffs, then sneezes very loudly. (the furnace turns to the left to sneeze onto the unconscious Phoenix)
Shot happens in Slow motion at furnace
“Ahh…! (Furnace begins to sneeze)
Shot 3
Camera turns to the protagonist
Protagonist tries to stop the furnace (slow motion)
Shot 4
The camera shows the whole room ( behind the two characters)
..Choooo! Furnace sneezes really hard and the whole room and all the furniture shakes
Shot 5
Close up to the Phoenix’s feather
The feather falls slowly and lands on Phoenix’s forehead
A small pause
Shot 6
Phoenix’s POV
Phoenix waking up (blinking effect from blurry to clear)
As her vision clears up, she sees the protagonist’s hand holding her feather.
Shot 7
Phoenix is stunned and tears instantly well up in her eyes
Shot 8
Shot switches to the outside (shows a bit of the building and the trees)
Phoenix screams “ahhhhhh”
The birds on the trees are startled and flies away
Scene 3
Shot 1
The camera is facing the mirror
Shot shows the middle half of the protagonist’s body
(The protagonist sticks the feather with tape onto the phoenix’s forehead)
Protagonist blocks the Phoenix then movies away
The feather on the Phoenix’s head is attached weirdly and slanted
Shot 2
Phoenix looks at herself at the mirror and looks sad
The feather shakes and then falls down
The protagonist panics and tries to catch the feather
Protagonist slams the feather onto phoenix’s head
Phoenix falling to the ground from the stool. The protagonist panics
Scene 4
Shot 1
Scene changes to the yard
Camera showing the furnace and protagonist in front with phoenix behind the pillars
The protagonist is working hard on refining the pills
The camera is facing the protagonist
Shot 2
The phoenix pokes her head out from behind the protagonist (With the feather on her head covered with tape) and watches the protagonist
Suddenly, the furnace coughed and the whole room was covered in smoke. Both their faces were covered with black ashes.
Part 2 - by Lily
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